JOB PROSPECTING LETTER TO HUMAN RESOURCES DEPARTMENT: WITHOUT REFERRAL

 

 

 

[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]

 

 

 

 

 

[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.

 

John Smith

 

XYZ Inc.

 

1234 First Street

 

Suite 567

 

Anycity, Anystate 85245]

 

 

 

Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],

 

 

 

Allow me to introduce myself, [NAME, ex. Jill Jones]. [RELATE HOW THE HIGHLIGHTS OF YOUR RESUME CAN BENEFIT THE FIRM, ex. Having had seven years of experience in sales and marketing of manufacturing supplies, I am confident my network of contacts in the field will be of great value to your firm. During my previous work experience, I have had close relations with several major manufacturers, which could be potential customers of your products. Accordingly, I am certain that I can increase your customer base.]

 

 

 

I have taken the liberty of including my resume with this letter. I am confident that you will find my strengths, abilities and experience of use to your firm. Allow me to call you sometime next week to determine a convenient time to talk.

 

 

 

I look forward to speaking with you.

 

 

 

Sincerely,

 

 

 

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[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]


APPLICATION TO POSTED JOB: WITHOUT REFERRAL

 

 

 

[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]

 

 

 

 

 

[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.

 

John Smith

 

XYZ Inc.

 

1234 First Street

 

Suite 567

 

Anycity, Anystate 85245]

 

 

 

Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],

 

 

 

I am writing regarding my interest in your [STATE POSITION, ex. sales manager] position. I have been following your firm for the past [DURATION, ex. four years]. [MAKE STATEMENT WHICH INDICATES YOU HAVE TAKEN THE EFFORT TO LEARN ABOUT THE FIRM, ex. I am convinced that the proliferation of automated compressor manufacturing facilities in the eastern United States, in conjunction with your new compressor technology, has the potential to place XYZ Inc. in forefront of its industry.] In addition to satisfying the qualifications of the position, allow me to highlight some other points which I am confident will interest you.

 

 

 

[RELATE HOW THE HIGHLIGHTS OF YOUR RESUME CAN BENEFIT THE FIRM, ex. Having had seven years of experience in sales and marketing of manufacturing supplies, I am confident my network of contacts in the field will be of great value to your firm. During my previous work experience, I have had close relations with several major manufacturers, which could be potential customers of your products. Accordingly, I am certain that I can increase your customer base.]

 

 

 

I have taken the liberty of including my resume with this letter; I am confident that you will find my strengths, abilities and experience of use to your firm. Allow me to call you sometime next week to determine a convenient time to talk.

 

 

 

I look forward to speaking with you.

 

 

 

Sincerely,

 

 

 

 

 

[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]



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APPLICATION TO POSTED JOB: WITH REFERRAL

 

 

 

[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]

 

 

 

 

 

[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.

 

John Smith

 

XYZ Inc.

 

1234 First Street

 

Suite 567

 

Anycity, Anystate 85245]

 

 

 

Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],

 

 

 

I am writing regarding my interest in your [STATE POSITION, ex. sales manager] position. [STATE REFERRAL NAME, ex. Mr. Dick Holmes] has been kind enough to refer me to you.

 

 

 

I have been following your firm for the past [DURATION, ex. four years]. [MAKE STATEMENT WHICH INDICATES YOU HAVE TAKEN THE EFFORT TO LEARN ABOUT THE FIRM, ex. I am convinced that the proliferation of automated compressor manufacturing facilities in the eastern United States, in conjunction with your new compressor technology, has the potential to place XYZ Inc. in forefront of its industry.] In addition to satisfying the qualifications of the position, allow me to highlight some other points which I am confident will interest you.

 

 

 

[RELATE HOW THE HIGHLIGHTS OF YOUR RESUME CAN BENEFIT THE FIRM, ex. Having had seven years of experience in sales and marketing of manufacturing supplies, I am confident my network of contacts in the field will be of great value to your firm. During my previous work experience, I have had close relations with several major manufacturers, which could be potential customers of your products. Accordingly, I am certain that I can increase your customer base.]

 

 

 

I have taken the liberty of including my resume with this letter; I am confident that you will find my strengths, abilities and experience of use to your firm. Allow me to call you sometime next week to determine a convenient time to talk.

 

 

 

I look forward to speaking with you.

 

 

 

Sincerely,

 

 

 

 

 

[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]


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JOB PROSPECTING LETTER TO HUMAN RESOURCES DEPARTMENT: WITH REFERRAL

 

[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]

 

 

[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.

John Smith

XYZ Inc.

1234 First Street

Suite 567

Anycity, Anystate 85245]

 

Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],

 

I am writing you after hearing from [REFERRAL NAME, ex. Mr. Dick Johnson] that [STATE NATURE OF REFERRAL, ex. your firm is considering expanding its sales staff].

 

Allow me to introduce myself, [NAME, ex. Jill Jones]. [RELATE HOW THE HIGHLIGHTS OF YOUR RESUME CAN BENEFIT THE FIRM, ex. Having had seven years of experience in sales and marketing of manufacturing supplies, I am confident my network of contacts in the field will be of great value to your firm. During my previous work experience, I have had close relations with several major manufacturers, which could be potential customers of your products. Accordingly, I am certain that I can increase your customer base.]

 

I have taken the liberty of including my resume with this letter. I am confident that you will find my strengths, abilities and experience of use to your firm. Allow me to call you sometime next week to determine a convenient time to talk.

 

I look forward to speaking with you.

 

Sincerely,

 

 

[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]

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JOB PROSPECTING LETTER TO MANAGEMENT: WITH REFERRAL

 

[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]

 

 

[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.

John Smith

XYZ Inc.

1234 First Street

Suite 567

Anycity, Anystate 85245]

 

Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],

 

[MENTION REFERRAL AT THE BEGINNING OF YOUR LETTER, ex. I understand from Mr. John Holmes that your firm is planning to expand geographically and is looking for new talent to facilitate that expansion.]

 

I have been following your firm for the past [DURATION, ex. four years]. [MAKE STATEMENT WHICH INDICATES YOU HAVE TAKEN THE EFFORT TO LEARN ABOUT THE FIRM, ex. I am convinced that the proliferation of automated compressor manufacturing facilities in the eastern United States, in conjunction with your new compressor technology, has the potential to place XYZ Inc. in forefront of its industry.]

 

I believe I have the ability to favorably affect your company’s bottom line.

 

Allow me to introduce myself, [NAME, ex. Jill Jones]. [RELATE HOW THE HIGHLIGHTS OF YOUR RESUME CAN BENEFIT THE FIRM, ex. Having had seven years of experience in sales and marketing of manufacturing supplies, I am confident my network of contacts in the field will be of great value to your firm. During my previous work experience, I have had close relations with several major manufacturers, which could be potential customers of your products. Accordingly, I am certain that I can increase your customer base.]

 

Since I understand that you are very busy, I have taken the liberty of including my resume with this letter. If we have an opportunity to speak with each other, I can better enumerate how I can be of service to your firm.

 

Please contact me at XXX-XXXX if I can serve you in any way.

 

Sincerely,

 

 

[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]

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UNQUALIFIED JOB OFFER ACCEPTANCE

 

[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]

 

 

[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.

John Smith

XYZ Inc.

1234 First Street

Suite 567

Anycity, Anystate 85245]

 

Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],

 

I am delighted to accept your job offer to work at [FIRM, ex. XYZ Inc]. As I understand, [STATE TERMS OF OFFER AS YOU UNDERSTAND THEM, ex. the salary will be $54,000, with 3 weeks of vacation and health care benefits.]

 

I thank you again and I look forward to working with [FIRM, ex. XYZ Inc].

 

Sincerely,

 

 

[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]


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NEGOTIATION OF JOB OFFER: REQUEST HIGHER SALARY

 

[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]

 

 

[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.

John Smith

XYZ Inc.

1234 First Street

Suite 567

Anycity, Anystate 85245]

 

Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],

 

I am delighted by your offer to join [FIRM, ex. XYZ Inc]. I find the position and job duties to be challenging, yet tailored to my abilities.

 

As you know, I am certain I can favorably affect your firm’s bottom line.

 

For this reason, I am confident that we can orchestrate a mutually-beneficial and prosperous arrangement. Having learned a great deal more about [FIRM, XYZ Inc.] during our interview, I have a clear vision as to where I will fit into and how I can contribute to the firm’s future profits. Since I believe firmly in my abilities as they apply to this position at your firm, I humbly request that we renegotiate the remuneration.

 

[STATE YOUR REQUEST, ex. I will be pleased to accept an offer which includes a 5% share of the sales of my division.] I trust this to be reasonable, and am confident you will be pleased with my results accordingly. Allow me to call you on [DATE, ex. Thursday] to discuss this.

 

I look forward to speaking with you soon.

 

Sincerely,

 

 

[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]