Samples of Letters
JOB PROSPECTING LETTER TO HUMAN RESOURCES DEPARTMENT: WITHOUT REFERRAL
[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]
[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.
John Smith
XYZ Inc.
1234
Anycity, Anystate 85245]
Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],
Allow me to introduce myself, [NAME, ex. Jill Jones]. [RELATE HOW THE HIGHLIGHTS OF YOUR RESUME CAN BENEFIT THE FIRM, ex. Having had seven years of experience in sales and marketing of manufacturing supplies, I am confident my network of contacts in the field will be of great value to your firm. During my previous work experience, I have had close relations with several major manufacturers, which could be potential customers of your products. Accordingly, I am certain that I can increase your customer base.]
I have taken the liberty of including my resume with this letter. I am confident that you will find my strengths, abilities and experience of use to your firm. Allow me to call you sometime next week to determine a convenient time to talk.
I look forward to speaking with you.
Sincerely,
[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]
APPLICATION TO POSTED JOB: WITHOUT REFERRAL
[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]
[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.
John Smith
XYZ Inc.
1234
Anycity, Anystate 85245]
Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],
I am writing regarding my
interest in your [STATE POSITION, ex. sales manager] position. I have been following your firm for the past
[DURATION, ex. four years]. [MAKE
STATEMENT WHICH INDICATES YOU HAVE TAKEN THE EFFORT TO LEARN ABOUT THE FIRM,
ex. I am convinced that the proliferation of automated compressor manufacturing
facilities in the eastern
[RELATE HOW THE HIGHLIGHTS OF YOUR RESUME CAN BENEFIT THE FIRM, ex. Having had seven years of experience in sales and marketing of manufacturing supplies, I am confident my network of contacts in the field will be of great value to your firm. During my previous work experience, I have had close relations with several major manufacturers, which could be potential customers of your products. Accordingly, I am certain that I can increase your customer base.]
I have taken the liberty of including my resume with this letter; I am confident that you will find my strengths, abilities and experience of use to your firm. Allow me to call you sometime next week to determine a convenient time to talk.
I look forward to speaking with you.
Sincerely,
[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]
APPLICATION TO POSTED JOB: WITH REFERRAL
[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]
[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.
John Smith
XYZ Inc.
1234
Anycity, Anystate 85245]
Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],
I am writing regarding my interest in your [STATE POSITION, ex. sales manager] position. [STATE REFERRAL NAME, ex. Mr. Dick Holmes] has been kind enough to refer me to you.
I have been following your firm
for the past [DURATION, ex. four years]. [MAKE STATEMENT WHICH INDICATES YOU HAVE TAKEN THE EFFORT TO LEARN ABOUT
THE FIRM, ex. I am convinced that the proliferation of automated compressor
manufacturing facilities in the eastern
[RELATE HOW THE HIGHLIGHTS OF YOUR RESUME CAN BENEFIT THE FIRM, ex. Having had seven years of experience in sales and marketing of manufacturing supplies, I am confident my network of contacts in the field will be of great value to your firm. During my previous work experience, I have had close relations with several major manufacturers, which could be potential customers of your products. Accordingly, I am certain that I can increase your customer base.]
I have taken the liberty of including my resume with this letter; I am confident that you will find my strengths, abilities and experience of use to your firm. Allow me to call you sometime next week to determine a convenient time to talk.
I look forward to speaking with you.
Sincerely,
[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]
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JOB PROSPECTING LETTER TO HUMAN RESOURCES DEPARTMENT: WITH REFERRAL
[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]
[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.
John Smith
XYZ Inc.
1234
Anycity, Anystate 85245]
Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],
I am writing you after hearing from [REFERRAL NAME, ex. Mr. Dick Johnson] that [STATE NATURE OF REFERRAL, ex. your firm is considering expanding its sales staff].
Allow me to introduce myself, [NAME, ex. Jill Jones]. [RELATE HOW THE HIGHLIGHTS OF YOUR RESUME CAN BENEFIT THE FIRM, ex. Having had seven years of experience in sales and marketing of manufacturing supplies, I am confident my network of contacts in the field will be of great value to your firm. During my previous work experience, I have had close relations with several major manufacturers, which could be potential customers of your products. Accordingly, I am certain that I can increase your customer base.]
I have taken the liberty of including my resume with this letter. I am confident that you will find my strengths, abilities and experience of use to your firm. Allow me to call you sometime next week to determine a convenient time to talk.
I look forward to speaking with you.
Sincerely,
[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]
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JOB PROSPECTING LETTER TO MANAGEMENT: WITH REFERRAL
[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]
[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.
John Smith
XYZ Inc.
1234
Anycity, Anystate 85245]
Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],
[MENTION REFERRAL AT THE BEGINNING OF YOUR LETTER, ex. I understand from Mr. John Holmes that your firm is planning to expand geographically and is looking for new talent to facilitate that expansion.]
I have been following your firm
for the past [DURATION, ex. four years]. [MAKE STATEMENT WHICH INDICATES YOU HAVE TAKEN THE EFFORT TO LEARN ABOUT
THE FIRM, ex. I am convinced that the proliferation of automated compressor
manufacturing facilities in the eastern
I believe I have the ability to favorably affect your company’s bottom line.
Allow me to introduce myself, [NAME, ex. Jill Jones]. [RELATE HOW THE HIGHLIGHTS OF YOUR RESUME CAN BENEFIT THE FIRM, ex. Having had seven years of experience in sales and marketing of manufacturing supplies, I am confident my network of contacts in the field will be of great value to your firm. During my previous work experience, I have had close relations with several major manufacturers, which could be potential customers of your products. Accordingly, I am certain that I can increase your customer base.]
Since I understand that you are very busy, I have taken the liberty of including my resume with this letter. If we have an opportunity to speak with each other, I can better enumerate how I can be of service to your firm.
Please contact me at XXX-XXXX if I can serve you in any way.
Sincerely,
[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]
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UNQUALIFIED JOB OFFER ACCEPTANCE
[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]
[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.
John Smith
XYZ Inc.
1234
Anycity, Anystate 85245]
Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],
I am delighted to accept your job offer to work at [FIRM, ex. XYZ Inc]. As I understand, [STATE TERMS OF OFFER AS YOU UNDERSTAND THEM, ex. the salary will be $54,000, with 3 weeks of vacation and health care benefits.]
I thank you again and I look forward to working with [FIRM, ex. XYZ Inc].
Sincerely,
[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]
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NEGOTIATION OF JOB OFFER: REQUEST HIGHER SALARY
[DATE, ex. Wednesday, June 11, 1998]
[NAME, COMPANY AND ADDRESS, ex.
John Smith
XYZ Inc.
1234
Anycity, Anystate 85245]
Dear [NAME, ex. John Smith],
I am delighted by your offer to join [FIRM, ex. XYZ Inc]. I find the position and job duties to be challenging, yet tailored to my abilities.
As you know, I am certain I can favorably affect your firm’s bottom line.
For this reason, I am confident that we can orchestrate a mutually-beneficial and prosperous arrangement. Having learned a great deal more about [FIRM, XYZ Inc.] during our interview, I have a clear vision as to where I will fit into and how I can contribute to the firm’s future profits. Since I believe firmly in my abilities as they apply to this position at your firm, I humbly request that we renegotiate the remuneration.
[STATE YOUR REQUEST, ex. I will be pleased to accept an offer which includes a 5% share of the sales of my division.] I trust this to be reasonable, and am confident you will be pleased with my results accordingly. Allow me to call you on [DATE, ex. Thursday] to discuss this.
I look forward to speaking with you soon.
Sincerely,
[YOUR NAME, ex. Jill Jones]